Big old moon leering at the trafficRed and white eyes are holographicYou seem so zealousAnd I'm so fucking jealousHelping our demons to become graphicYou can oversee all the rat racesMeanwhile you pierce hidden placesWhat gave you the rightTo reserve your lightFor transforming the strangest of faces?My rage you cool and sootheMy ghosts you swiftly removeYour divine showerRefills sexual powerShow us we have nothing to prove
7/17/2008 11:07:12 PM
Keep pouring gas on the fire. I could bury your ass in about two seconds.
7/17/2008 11:07:43 PM
I stopped when I saw you rhymed traffic with holographic
7/17/2008 11:07:59 PM
well it rhymes. so good job!!
7/17/2008 11:08:37 PM
Why thankee RhymezoneNOT YOU WE NAMED THE MONKEY RHYMEZONE
7/17/2008 11:10:55 PM
is this the limerick format?aabba? i cant remember
7/17/2008 11:13:10 PM
No. You're wrong.
7/17/2008 11:13:27 PM
k i read it all...it doesnt make any sense
7/17/2008 11:14:40 PM
lol
7/17/2008 11:14:59 PM
There once was an internet chickwho had a good taste in flicksHer poems were decentand fairly frequentbut she could only write limericks
7/17/2008 11:17:43 PM
awesome!
7/17/2008 11:44:49 PM
7/18/2008 12:28:42 AM
keep writingthis reads like a practice poem
7/18/2008 1:36:52 AM
I need to post like this more often.
7/19/2008 1:41:58 AM