Blue moon:

blue waves of motion entrench themselves within sight

yet so far away you reach me to steal a glance and forget what is right

from wandering eye to eye you continue to enchant

and as the night fades you start to recant

from those hearts that bleed passion for a strangers light

and again you leave strangers lingering without sight

[Edited on February 23, 2010 at 10:33 PM. Reason : x]

2/23/2010 10:30:08 PM

Lovely Stranger:

sweet and lovely stranger

how star crossed paths meet

to diverge and coalesce again

will you follow me

will you call to me

for whichever path I take

I'll never forget

how sweet and lovely strangers met


[Edited on February 23, 2010 at 10:32 PM. Reason : x]

2/23/2010 10:32:08 PM

so you did not take my advice i see

2/23/2010 10:34:23 PM

Broken Soul:

Broken Soul

why can't you speak anymore

tell me your secrets and let me know

the reasons for that vaccuum

you calll your soul

for reasons unknown

i gravitate to that black hole

and as seconds pass and I fall

i remember the few moments

and it seems like an eternity ago

consume me tell me that you would never have known

that this soul would shatter to mend your own

2/23/2010 10:34:27 PM

are you being funny or

2/23/2010 10:39:07 PM

just poetry

2/23/2010 10:49:30 PM

2/23/2010 11:07:36 PM

2/23/2010 11:14:34 PM

jersey you are becoming sucky

2/23/2010 11:15:14 PM

so??

2/23/2010 11:16:38 PM

2/23/2010 11:17:15 PM

2/23/2010 11:17:28 PM

I don't think you're sucky jersey86

2/23/2010 11:17:50 PM

bubblebobble makes me think of bubbles from trailer park boys.

2/23/2010 11:19:16 PM

ok that is the last straw

jersey must pay the price

2/23/2010 11:20:08 PM

hahahahahah

2/23/2010 11:20:21 PM

[Edited on February 23, 2010 at 11:34 PM. Reason : ,]

2/23/2010 11:22:26 PM

yeah that didn't work.

2/23/2010 11:24:15 PM

Forever Farewell :

Farewell fair lady

beauty was only skin deep

and though you opened up

to show me a shattered soul

your mind and will were tethered

to a giant black hole

and though it hurt me to let you go

i bid you farewell

and hope to see you no more.

3/1/2010 5:57:57 PM

so has this shit got you laid yet or what?

3/1/2010 5:58:43 PM

you know you have 30 minutes to edit a post, right?

3/1/2010 6:01:48 PM

I expect a lot of fat chicks, or "misunderstood" decent looking chicks to post in this thread.

To actually address the topic of poetry, though: I think Philip Larkin's stuff is really worth checking out.

[Edited on March 1, 2010 at 6:12 PM. Reason : ...]

3/1/2010 6:11:54 PM

A rose

A rose with soft and sweet lips

caressing and moving with my own

and for a moment we lose ourselves

in chaotic fashion we lock

and merge into one

one mind one soul

im yours and yours mine

until infinite time as my rose

[Edited on March 15, 2010 at 6:08 PM. Reason : x]

3/15/2010 6:07:51 PM

A rose

A rose, named a rose, rose

No... I shall call you Sarose

Rose

3/15/2010 6:15:05 PM

A tree falls.

3/15/2010 6:18:24 PM